北京新航道学校 李传伟

　　第二十二天：中国式陷阱---大作文语言错误

　　语言方面是判卷关注的第二个方面。语言错误较多会扣分，而太多的话就会降低评分档次。有些语言错误是阅卷老师比较关注的，考生必须尽力避免。事实上，考生只要细心，可以少犯乃至不犯这类错误。这些错误包括：

　　1.句子的主语和谓语不一致

　　2.时态 　

　　3.名词的单复数

　　4.定冠词和不定冠词

　　5.搭配 　

　　6.单词的拼写

　　例一，

　　错误：More and more people believe smoking do harm to health, waste money. (主谓不一致)

　　正确：More and more people believe smoking does harm to health, and is a waste of money.

　　例二，

　　错误：If the law said that the man who destroy the wildlife’s environment will be fined 10,000 dollars, there will be less people to do that. (时态)

　　正确：If the law says that the man who destroys the wildlife’s environment will be fined 10,000 dollars, there will be fewer offenders.

　　例三，

　　错误：So some of the wildlives become homeless and extinction. (名词的单复数)

　　正确：So some of the wildlife become homeless and extinct.

　　例四，

　　错误：For above-mentioned reasons, I believe the consumption of tobacco will decrease and all problems it causes will be solved. (定冠词)

　　正确：For the above-mentioned reasons, I believe the consumption of tobacco will decrease and all the problems it causes will be solved.

　　例五，

　　错误：Although the light is weak, it plays a great effect which will make people more firmly than before. (搭配)

　　正确：Although the light is weak, it has a great effect which will make people more firm than before.

　　例六，

　　错误：We should take effective methods to deduce the number of fishing boats in the sea. (拼写)

　　正确：We should take effective measures to reduce the number of fishing boats in the sea.